I fling and bounce these calls
Like a stumbling whiskey walk.
Side to side. Wall to wall.
Failed attempts meet each other
In the arena and step inside
The ring like wrestlers in a cage.
Each shows off their signature move
That might leave it standing. Victor.
Undisputed champion of make believe,
Gold-plated with a fabricated title.
Your writing is going in some fantastic new directions Wulf. The use of language in this one feels different, as if you are experimenting a bit more. I love that! This , “Like a stumbling whiskey walk.” and this, “Gold-plated with a fabricated title.” so good!!!!!
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Thank you, as always, Susan. The way you point out examples really helps me understand what you are feeling.
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I like your experimenting too. Undisputed champion of make believe….
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Thank you, Bojana. You are always so responsive.
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Now how do I respond to this?
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Hopefully with your usual panache.
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So help us God.
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Don’t think we’ll be getting any help there.
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Ah right, I forgot we’re atheists. Sounds nice tough.
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Your responses to each other are always pure poetry. 🤣
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And poets we shall remain, right George?
I’m glad you’re having fun, Tom.
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Yes…we shall.
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I said to someone that it’s like morning tv show co-hosts. 🤣
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Exactly that! 👏👏👏
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…and next after this break, we’ll meet a lady who’s making ends meet by making custom toaster covers.
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Hahaha! Just enough time to get some popcorn and come back for the next bit. 🍿🤩🥤
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Undisputed champion of make believe… Sounds like some bloggers I see around here lately. Well done.
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Glad you liked, Walt.
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